委婉表达论文写得不好

问：请英语高手，帮忙翻译下，请勿用翻译工具翻译，下面是参考，望增加点内容，谦虚委婉表达自己论文的不足

1. 答：Finally,I would like to talk about the deficiencies of this paper. During the process posing and revising,though I spared no efforts to exert all the knowledge I have acquired from the collected materials,it still has many ings.Through this painstaking process,I also e more conscious about the shortage of my stored knowledge and experience.I suppose there is a big space for improving.The argument could be more distinctive and the grounds for it could be more sufficient.With the eager emotion to get this paper better and improve myself in the future,I can not wait to receive your critics and suggestions.Thank you a lot my dear teachers.中间你没有说出哪不足，我悉启宽给你加上：论点可以更鲜明，论据可以更充分，这样说也比较委婉。如果再多说具体哪不足也不睁亮好了，因为老师会想你知道哪不足为什么还不改。旁兄放宽心啦～即使自己的论文写的没有那么出色，明天也一定要表现的自信，好运！！
2. 答：Finally, I want to talk about the ings of this paper. In the paper writing and revision process, I am ing more aware of their lack of knowledge and experience. Although, I tried to collect materials, do our best to use their learned knowledge to thesis writing, but there are many papers still inadequate, should be improved. Please the judges instructors criticism and learn in the future I learn more, thank a teacher
3. 答：Finally, I want to discuss the shortage of this thesis existence.
   In the process of the writing and modification of thesis, I more and more know I's knowledge and empirical of lack.Although, I collect material possibly, sparing no effort can make use of the knowledge that oneself learns to carry on a thesis writing,the thesis still keeps existing the place of much shortage and needs an improvement.Please more criticize to correct, let me arrive in aftertime's study high school more, thank teacher
4. 答：Finally, I want to talk about the ings of this paper. In the process about paper writing and revision, I am ing to realized that knowledge and lack of experience myself. I have tried my best to collect materials, and to thesis writing by learned knowledge, but mistakes still be over there, I want the teacher criticized me, so that I can learn more in the future., thank the teacher a lot

问：如何委婉的说自己毕业毕业论文中存在其他问题

1. 答：借代大锋者用相关的事物代替所要表达的事物。借代种类：特征代事物、具体代抽象、部分基源代全体、整体代部分。如：不拿群众一针一线。先生，给现钱，袁世凯，不行么？反语用与本意相反的词语或句子表达本意，以说滚薯反话的方式加强表达效果。有的讽刺揭露，有的表示亲密友好的感情。如：（清国留学生）也有解散辫子，盘得平的，除下帽来，油光可鉴，宛如小姑娘的发髻一般，还要将脖子扭几扭，实在标致极了。

问：学生论文不好怎么委婉的评价

1. 答：直接指出问题所在即可，不用多说什么了······